考研小作文 PL003・建议信 suggestion / advice

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考研小作文 PL003・建议信 suggestion / advice

框架卡 · 句式库 · 【英一 2014】真题 Directions 逐字 + 原创范文 + 逐段批注

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01识别标志与格式框架

建议信是给某人(校长、朋友、组织者)提改进意见。识别词:suggesting / offer some suggestions / give advice / recommend how to。2010–2026 共考 5 次(英一 3、英二 2),是仅次于邀请的高频类型。

建议信骨架(可迁移,非死背)

称呼
Dear Mr. President, / Dear friends, / Dear Paul,
开头
I am writing to offer some suggestions on how to …(一句话点目的 + 身份)。
主体
First / Besides / Finally 引出 2–3 条建议,每条”建议 + 一句理由或做法”。
结尾
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. + 感谢/期待。
落款
Yours sincerely, / Yours,  Li Ming
语气要点:建议信最忌命令口吻。对正式对象用 I suggest that … (should) … / It would be a good idea to … / Why not …;对朋友可稍轻松,但仍要客气。给理由比堆建议更重要——每条建议配一句”为什么有用”,内容才充实。

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02建议信常用句式库

开头 · 表明目的I am writing to offer some suggestions on how to improve … / I would like to make a few recommendations concerning …
提建议 · 委婉句式I suggest that we (should) … / It would be advisable to … / Why not …? / It might be a good idea to …
给理由 · 支撑This way, students can … / By doing so, they will … / For example, … / As a result, …
并列 · 补充建议Besides, … / In addition, … / Moreover, … / Finally, …
结尾 · 礼貌收束I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. / I would be grateful if you could take them into consideration. / Thank you for your time.

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03真题示范:【英一】2014 · 第 51 题

选题理由:最经典的建议信——向校长建议改善学生体质,正式语气、三条建议结构清晰,是建议信的”标准母题”。

Directions(逐字自精校真题)

51. Directions: Write a letter of about 100 words to the president of your university, suggesting how to improve students’ physical condition.

You should include the details you think necessary.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

Do not write the address. (10 points)

原创范文 · 正文约 91 词(不含称呼落款)

称呼Dear Mr. President,

P1I am Li Ming, a sophomore at our university. I am writing to offer a few suggestions on how to improve students’ physical condition.

P2First, I suggest that we have at least one PE class every week, so that everyone gets regular exercise. Besides, the sports grounds should stay open longer in the evening, allowing students to run or play ball after study. Finally, the canteen might offer healthier dishes, with more fresh vegetables and less fried food.

P3I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. Thank you for your consideration.

落款Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

要点题干要求”suggesting how to improve physical condition + include details”。正文用 PE 课、延长操场开放、食堂健康饮食三条具体措施完成”details”,覆盖要点。

语气对校长用 Dear Mr. President / Yours sincerely,建议句式 I suggest that … / should / might 委婉而非命令,语域恰当。

升级点allowing students to run… 现在分词作伴随、with more fresh vegetables 介词短语补充,比平铺 “and the canteen offers…” 更连贯。

避雷落款写 Li Ming、不写地址,严格照题干;不要画蛇添足写 “I am a student from Class 2, Grade…” 这种题干没要的身份细节。

下一课 PL004 · 邀请信及回复:邀请外教当评委、接受教授演讲邀请——邀请与婉拒的句式差异。

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