考研翻译 PT009・【英一】真题精练 2010–2014

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考研翻译 PT009・【英一】真题精练 2010–2014

英语(一) Part C · 2010–2014 · 每年 5 个划线句 · 共 25 句

英一 2010

1英语(一) 2010 年 · 5 个划线句

原文逐字自精校真题;参考译文为本系列原创。

(46) Scientists jumped to the rescue with some distinctly shaky evidence to the effect that insects would eat us up if birds failed to control them.

句式拆解主干 Scientists jumped to the rescue;with…evidence 方式状语;to the effect that… 同位语从句;if birds failed… 条件从句。
参考译文科学家们赶紧拿出一些相当站不住脚的证据来解围,大意是:倘若鸟儿不能控制昆虫,昆虫就会把我们统统吃光。
采分点jumped to the rescue(赶紧解围);shaky evidence(站不住脚的证据);to the effect that(大意是);if 条件语气。
易错把 to the effect that 逐字译成“达到……效果”;if 条件当成一般时间。

(47) but we have at least drawn nearer the point of admitting that birds should continue as a matter of intrinsic right, regardless of the presence or absence of economic advantage to us.

句式拆解主干 we have drawn nearer the point;of admitting that… 同位语;regardless of… 让步状语;as a matter of intrinsic right 方式状语。
参考译文但我们至少已逐渐接近于承认:无论这些鸟类对我们是否具有经济利益,它们都应当凭一种固有的权利继续存在。
采分点drawn nearer the point of admitting(接近于承认);intrinsic right(固有权利);regardless of the presence or absence(无论有无)正反两面。
易错漏译 regardless of 的让步语气;presence or absence 只译一面。

(48) Time was when biologists somewhat overworked the evidence that these creatures preserve the health of game by killing the physically weak, or that they prey only on “worthless” species.

句式拆解主干 Time was when…(曾有一段时期);biologists overworked the evidence;两个 that 同位语从句并列;by killing… 方式状语。
参考译文曾有那么一段时期,生物学家多少有些滥用这样的证据:这些动物通过捕杀体弱个体来保持猎物群体的健康,或者说它们只捕食“没有价值”的物种。
采分点Time was when(曾有一度);overworked the evidence(滥用证据);game(猎物,非“游戏”);两个 that 并列同位语。
易错game 误作“游戏”;Time was when 译不出“曾经一度”。

(49) In Europe, where forestry is ecologically more advanced, the noncommercial tree species are recognized as members of the native forest community, to be preserved as such, within reason.

句式拆解主干 the noncommercial tree species are recognized as…(被动);where… 定语从句修饰 Europe;to be preserved… 不定式被动补语。
参考译文在林业生态更为发达的欧洲,没有商业价值的树种被视为原生森林群落的成员,因而也应得到相应的保护——当然,须在合理范围之内。
采分点are recognized as(被公认为);noncommercial(无商业价值);to be preserved as such(相应地受到保护);within reason(合理范围内)。
易错noncommercial 误作“非商业的”生硬翻译;within reason 漏译。

(50) It tends to ignore, and thus eventually to eliminate, many elements in the land community that lack commercial value, but that are essential to its healthy functioning.

句式拆解主干 It tends to ignore…many elements;and thus eventually to eliminate 并列插入;两个 that 并列定语从句修饰 elements,but 表转折。
参考译文它往往会忽视——并最终淘汰掉——土地群落中许多不具商业价值、却对其健康运转至关重要的要素。
采分点tends to ignore / eliminate 两个并列动词;两个 that 间 but 的转折;healthy functioning(健康运转)。
易错漏译 but 转折;把两个 that 都压成超长“的”定语。

英一 2011

2英语(一) 2011 年 · 5 个划线句

原文逐字自精校真题;参考译文为本系列原创。

(46) Allen’s contribution was to take an assumption we all share—that because we are not robots we therefore control our thoughts—and reveal its erroneous nature.

句式拆解主干 Allen’s contribution was to take an assumption…and reveal its erroneous nature;we all share 定语从句;破折号内 that… 同位语。
参考译文艾伦的贡献在于:他抓住了一个我们都认同的假设——因为我们不是机器人,所以能够控制自己的思想——并揭示了这一假设的错误本质。
采分点contribution was to take…and reveal(在于抓住……并揭示);erroneous nature(错误本质);破折号插入语要处理成中文破折号。
易错把 take an assumption 译成“采取一个假设”;插入语不分层。

(47) while we may be able to sustain the illusion of control through the conscious mind alone, in reality we are continually faced with a question: “Why cannot I make myself do this or achieve that?”

句式拆解主干 we are faced with a question;while… 让步/时间状语;through the conscious mind 方式状语;直接引语宾语从句。
参考译文尽管我们或许仅凭有意识的心智就能维持“控制一切”的错觉,可现实中我们却不断面临这样一个问题:为什么我没法让自己做到这件事、实现那件事?
采分点sustain the illusion of control(维持控制的错觉);while 让步;be faced with a question;直接引语保留引号。
易错while 误当“当……时”;illusion 误作“幻觉”贬义过重。

(48) This seems a justification for neglect of those in need, and a rationalization of exploitation, of the superiority of those at the top and the inferiority of those at the bottom.

句式拆解主干 This seems a justification…and a rationalization;两个 for/of 并列说明 justification 的内容;多个 of 层层限定。
参考译文这似乎为“忽视那些需要帮助的人”提供了借口,也为剥削、为“在上者优越、在下者卑贱”的说辞找到了合理化依据。
采分点justification for neglect(为忽视辩护);rationalization of exploitation(把剥削合理化);the top / the bottom(上层/底层)。
易错of 层层限定翻成一串“的”;in need(需要帮助者)漏译。

(49) circumstances seem to be designed to bring out the best in us and if we feel that we have been “wronged” then we are unlikely to begin a conscious effort to escape from our situation.

句式拆解主干 circumstances seem to be designed to bring out the best in us;and 连接并列复合句;if… 条件从句;to begin a conscious effort 宾语。
参考译文环境似乎就是为了激发我们身上最好的一面而设;而如果我们觉得自己“受了委屈”,就不太可能开始有意识地努力摆脱现状。
采分点be designed to(旨在/为……而设);bring out the best in us(激发出最好的一面);wronged(受委屈);escape from our situation(摆脱处境)。
易错bring out the best 望文生义;wronged 误作“错误”。

(50) The upside is the possibilities contained in knowing that everything is up to us; where before we were experts in the array of limitations, now we become authorities of what is possible.

句式拆解主干 The upside is the possibilities…;contained in knowing that… 过去分词定语;分号后 where… 对比状语从句。
参考译文好处在于:当我们懂得“一切都取决于自己”,种种可能便随之展开;过去我们是“种种限制”里的行家,如今则成为“一切可能”的权威。
采分点upside(积极面/好处);everything is up to us(全取决于我们);where 对比(过去 vs 现在);authorities of what is possible。
易错upside 误作“上面”;分号后 where 对比关系译丢。

英一 2012

3英语(一) 2012 年 · 5 个划线句

原文逐字自精校真题;参考译文为本系列原创。

(46) In physics, one approach takes this impulse for unification to its extreme, and seeks a theory of everything—a single generative equation for all we see.

句式拆解主干 one approach takes this impulse…to its extreme and seeks a theory;a single generative equation 同位语;for all we see 定语。
参考译文在物理学中,有一条思路把这种追求统一的冲动推向了极致,去寻找一个“万有理论”——一个能解释我们所见一切的生成性方程。
采分点takes…to its extreme(推向极端);impulse for unification(统一的冲动);theory of everything(万有理论);破折号同位语。
易错takes…to its extreme 译生硬;theory of everything 望文生义。

(47) Here, Darwinism seems to offer justification, for if all humans share common origins, it seems reasonable to suppose that cultural diversity could also be traced to more constrained beginnings.

句式拆解主干 Darwinism seems to offer justification;for 并列原因连词;if… 条件;it seems reasonable to suppose that… 形式主语句。
参考译文在此,达尔文主义似乎提供了依据:倘若所有人类都有共同的起源,那么有理由推测,文化多样性同样可以追溯到更为有限的开端。
采分点offer justification(提供依据);if all humans share common origins;it seems reasonable to suppose;traced to…beginnings(追溯到……起源)。
易错for(因为)误当“为了”;形式主语 it 没还原。

(48) To filter out what is unique from what is shared might enable us to understand how complex cultural behavior arose and what guides it in evolutionary or cognitive terms.

句式拆解主干 To filter out…might enable us to understand…;what is unique / what is shared 名词性从句;how…arose 与 what guides it 并列宾语。
参考译文把“独特之处”从“共有之处”中筛选出来,或许能让我们理解:复杂的文化行为是如何产生的,又是什么在进化或认知层面引导着它。
采分点To filter out…from…(把……从……中筛出);enable us to understand;how…arose(如何产生);in evolutionary or cognitive terms(从进化/认知角度)。
易错what is unique / what is shared 两个名词性从句没分清;in…terms 译丢。

(49) The second, by Joshua Greenberg, takes a more empirical approach to universality, identifying traits (particularly in word order) shared by many languages, which are considered to represent biases that result from cognitive constraints.

句式拆解主干 The second takes a more empirical approach;identifying traits… 现在分词状语;shared by many languages 后置定语;which are considered… 非限定定从;that result from… 定从。
参考译文第二条思路由乔舒亚·格林伯格提出,它对普遍性采取更重实证的方法,识别出许多语言共有的特征(尤其是语序方面),这些特征被认为代表了认知约束所造成的种种偏向。
采分点empirical approach(实证方法);identifying traits shared by…;biases that result from cognitive constraints(认知约束导致的偏向)。
易错现在分词 identifying 没处理成伴随动作;biases 误作“偏见”贬义。

(50) Chomsky’s grammar should show patterns of language change that are independent of the family tree or the pathway tracked through it, whereas Greenbergian universality predicts strong co-dependencies between particular types of word-order relations.

句式拆解主干 Chomsky’s grammar should show patterns…;that are independent of… 定从;whereas 对比连词;co-dependencies between…
参考译文乔姆斯基的语法应当能显示出独立于语言谱系树、也独立于沿谱系追溯路径的语言演变模式;而格林伯格式的普遍性则预言,特定类型的语序关系之间存在强相互依存。
采分点independent of the family tree(独立于谱系树);whereas 对比;strong co-dependencies(强相互依存)。
易错whereas 对比译丢;family tree 误作“家谱”。

英一 2013

4英语(一) 2013 年 · 5 个划线句

原文逐字自精校真题;参考译文为本系列原创。

(46) yet when one looks at the photographs of the gardens created by the homeless, it strikes one that, for all their diversity of styles, these gardens speak of various other fundamental urges, beyond that of decoration and creative expression.

句式拆解主干 it strikes one that…(形式主语,真正主语 that 从句);when… 时间状语;created by the homeless 后置定语;for all… 让步插入。
参考译文然而,当人们看到无家可归者所创作的那些花园的照片时,会突然意识到:尽管这些花园风格各异,它们却还传达出其他种种基本的冲动,而不只是装饰与创造性表达。
采分点it strikes one that(人们突然意识到);created by the homeless(无家可归者创作的);for all(尽管);beyond that of(不止于)。
易错for all 误当“为了所有”;it strikes one 形式主语没还原。

(47) A sacred place of peace, however crude it may be, is a distinctly human need, as opposed to shelter, which is a distinctly animal need.

句式拆解主干 A sacred place of peace…is a distinctly human need;however crude it may be 让步插入;as opposed to… 对比;which… 定从修饰 shelter。
参考译文一处神圣的宁静之所,无论多么简陋,都是人类特有的需求;而遮风避雨之处,则是动物特有的需求。
采分点however crude it may be(无论多么简陋);distinctly human / animal need(人类/动物特有);as opposed to(与……相对)。
易错however(无论多么)误当“然而”;distinctly 漏译。

(48) The gardens of the homeless, which are in effect homeless gardens, introduce form into an urban environment where it either didn’t exist or was not discernible as such.

句式拆解主干 The gardens…introduce form into an urban environment;which are in effect homeless gardens 非限定定从;where… 定从修饰 environment。
参考译文无家可归者的花园——实际上也就是“无家之园”——把一种“形式”引入了城市环境,而在那里,这种形式要么原本不存在,要么无法被如此辨认出来。
采分点in effect(实际上);introduce form into(把形式引入);where it didn’t exist / not discernible(不存在或无法辨认)。
易错in effect 漏译;discernible 误作“可看见的”。

(49) most of us give in to a demoralization of spirit which we usually blame on some psychological conditions, until one day we find ourselves in a garden and feel the oppression vanish as if by magic.

句式拆解主干 most of us give in to a demoralization of spirit;which… 定从;until… 时间状语;find ourselves in a garden 与 feel…vanish 并列。
参考译文我们大多数人会陷入精神的萎靡,还通常把它归咎于某种心理状况;直到有一天,我们发现自己置身园中,那份压抑竟像变魔术一般烟消云散。
采分点give in to a demoralization of spirit(陷入精神萎靡);blame on(归咎于);as if by magic(像变魔术一样)。
易错demoralization 望文生义;until 时间关系译硬。

(50) It is this implicit or explicit reference to nature that fully justifies the use of word garden, though in a “liberated” sense, to describe these synthetic constructions.

句式拆解主干 It is…that… 强调句;reference to nature 为被强调部分;though in a “liberated” sense 让步插入;to describe… 目的。
参考译文正是这种或明或暗对自然的指涉,才充分证明了用“花园”一词——尽管是在一种“解放了的”意义上——来描述这些人造构筑物是合理的。
采分点It is…that… 强调句;implicit or explicit(或明或暗);justifies the use of;synthetic constructions(人工构筑物)。
易错强调句 It is…that 没译出“正是”;synthetic 误作“合成的”生硬。

英一 2014

5英语(一) 2014 年 · 5 个划线句

原文逐字自精校真题;参考译文为本系列原创。

(46) It is also the reason why when we try to describe music with words, all we can do is articulate our reactions to it, and not grasp music itself.

句式拆解主干 It is also the reason…;why… 定从修饰 reason;when we try to… 时间状语;all we can do is articulate…
参考译文这也解释了为什么:当我们试图用语言描述音乐时,我们所能做的只是说出自己对音乐的感受,却无法把握音乐本身。
采分点the reason why;try to describe music with words;articulate our reactions(说出感受);grasp music itself(把握音乐本身)。
易错articulate 误作“清晰发音”;grasp 误作“抓住”。

(47) By all accounts he was a freethinking person, and a courageous one, and I find courage an essential quality for the understanding, let alone the performance, of his works.

句式拆解主干 he was a freethinking person, and a courageous one;By all accounts 状语;I find courage an essential quality;let alone the performance 插入。
参考译文人们一致认为,他是一个思想自由的人,而且是一个勇敢的人;而我认为,勇气是理解其作品——更不用说演奏其作品——所不可或缺的品质。
采分点By all accounts(大家一致认为);freethinking(思想自由);find courage an essential quality(认为勇气是必备品质);let alone(更不用说)。
易错By all accounts 漏译;let alone 递进关系译丢。

(48) Beethoven’s habit of increasing the volume with an extreme intensity and then abruptly following it with a sudden soft passage was only rarely used by composers before him.

句式拆解主干 Beethoven’s habit…was only rarely used by composers before him(被动);of increasing…and then following… 定语;with an extreme intensity 状语。
参考译文贝多芬那种先以极强的力度渐强、随后又骤然接入一段轻柔乐段的习惯,在他之前的作曲家身上是很少出现的。
采分点habit of increasing the volume;extreme intensity(极强力度);abruptly following with a sudden soft passage;被动 was rarely used by。
易错habit 误作“习惯”中性但可;soft passage(轻柔乐段)译不准。

(49) Especially significant was his view of freedom, which, for him, was associated with the rights and responsibilities of the individual: he advocated freedom of thought and of personal expression.

句式拆解主干 Especially significant was his view of freedom(倒装,表语提前);which… 非限定定从;冒号后 he advocated… 解释。
参考译文尤其重要的是他对自由的看法:在他看来,自由与个人的权利和责任密不可分——他倡导思想自由和个人表达的自由。
采分点倒装 Especially significant was…;associated with rights and responsibilities;advocated freedom of thought and expression。
易错倒装没还原成正常语序;associated with(与……相关)漏译。

(50) One could interpret much of the work of Beethoven by saying that suffering is inevitable, but the courage to fight it renders life worth living.

句式拆解主干 One could interpret much of the work…by saying that…;suffering is inevitable 与 the courage…renders life worth living 并列。
参考译文我们大可以这样来解读贝多芬的大部分作品:苦难在所难免,但与之抗争的勇气,却让生命值得一过。
采分点interpret…by saying that(可以这样解读);inevitable(不可避免);renders life worth living(使生命值得活)。
易错renders…worth living 译生硬;saying that 处理成“认为”。

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