考研大作文 PW002・图画作文三段框架
描图 → 寓意 → 议论 三段锁死 · 描图句式库
01图画作文三段框架：80 行格子里写什么
英一大作文 Directions 永远是三件事：describe → interpret → comment。把它锁死成三段，段段对应一个任务，就不会漏点。
| 段落 | 对应 Directions | 必写要素 |
|---|---|---|
| P1 描图 | describe the picture briefly | 人物身份/动作 + 场景 + 关键文字气泡/图注；双图要写清对比 |
| P2 寓意 | interpret its (intended) meaning | 主题句点破 + 原因分析 + 1 个例证或后果 |
| P3 评论 | give your comments | 立场 + 建议/呼吁 + 一句话升华 |
篇幅比例建议 2:4:3（总 180 词左右）。描图段最忌“抄图注当作文”——Directions 要的是 brief describe，不是把画面逐像素罗列。
02描图句式库：人物 / 动作 / 场景 / 文字
描图段的万能骨架 = 开头引入图 + 主体动作 + 补充细节 + 点出文字。下面句型按功能分组，考场上直接拼装。
| 功能 | 可套用句型（原创整理） |
|---|---|
| 引入图画 | As is vividly shown/depicted in the drawing, … / The drawing presents a scene in which … / What the drawing illustrates is a common phenomenon: … |
| 人物动作 | In the picture, a young man is sitting …, staring at … while ignoring … / Two men stand side by side, one … and the other … |
| 双图对比 | On the left, …; on the right, however, … / The two pictures stand in sharp contrast: …, whereas … |
| 引用气泡 | A speech bubble reads, “…”. / He murmurs to himself, “…” |
| 场景氛围 | The background is crowded with … / The scene is set in …, where … |
| 过渡到寓意 | This seemingly simple scene is thought-provoking and conveys a clear message. / The picture is far more than a joke—it reveals … |
- 人：画里几个人？身份（学生/老人/家长）？表情是喜是忧？
- 动作：正在做什么？谁主动、谁被动？
- 场景：家里、教室、路上、山上？环境烘托了什么？
- 字：图注、气泡、标牌上的中文/英文——往往就是命题人递给你的“题眼”，必须写进描图段。
反例：只写 “The picture is very interesting and tells us a lot.” 这是空话，等于没描图。正确做法是落到具体动作与文字，如 “Four friends sit around a dinner table, each lowering their head to a mobile phone.”
03描图示范：以 2015“手机时代的聚会”为例
真题画面：四人围圆桌聚餐，桌上菜肴丰盛，四人却各自低头看手机。下面是一段原创描图示范（约 48 词），标注每句功能。
As is vividly shown in the drawing, four young friends sit around a dinner table laden with dishes. Yet, instead of talking to one another, each lowers his or her head, eyes fixed on a mobile phone. The warm meal, ironically, has turned into a gathering of isolated screen-watchers. （48 words）
句1引入+场景（围桌、菜肴）；句2核心动作对比（本应交谈却看手机）；句3点出讽刺意味，自然过渡到寓意。全程客观、无议论，却已把“题眼”埋好。
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