Wr009 · 演讲稿 / 致辞 / 发言稿:写出有号召力的表达。
称呼开场点题,主体分点说事,结尾号召致谢
01演讲稿 / 致辞:怎么写出台下掌声
33 套天津卷中,演讲 / 致辞 / 发言稿共 6 套(2004 / 2009 / 2013 / 2016 / 2020.5 / 2024.6),是仅次于书信的第二大文体。它不是把信念出来,而是对一群人说话,要有现场感和号召力。
注意:演讲稿最常见的失分是写成书信——加了称呼语却又写 Yours, Li Jin,或者通篇 I 如何如何、没有 we 与号召。记住:上台说话,结尾永远是 Thank you!。
02高分句式库:开场 · 主体 · 号召 · 致谢
| 功能 | 自研句型 | 中文说明 |
|---|---|---|
| 开场点题 | Good morning / afternoon, dear friends. It’s my honor to speak here today. | 标准称呼 + 荣幸开场。 |
| 开场点题 | Today I’d like to share my ideas on … with you. | 一句话点出演讲主题。 |
| 分点阐述 | First, … Second, … What’s more, … | 主体分点,条理清晰。 |
| 分点阐述 | Take … as an example, we can … | 用举例让观点落地,不空喊。 |
| 号召呼吁 | Let’s take action now to …! / It is high time that we did … | 祈使句 / 虚拟语气发出号召,最有力量。 |
| 号召呼吁 | Small efforts can add up to make a big difference, can’t they? | 反问 + 排比,增强现场感染力。 |
| 结尾致谢 | I sincerely hope / wish … / May our friendship last forever! | 表达祝愿,呼应致辞 / 欢送场景。 |
| 结尾致谢 | Thank you for your listening / attention! | 演讲稿固定收尾,不加落款。 |
032024 年 6 月 · 低碳校园英语演讲(精讲)
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津,学校即将举办“低碳校园,从我做起”英语主题演讲活动,你要报名参加。请根据以下提示,写一篇演讲稿:
- 指出校园中不符合低碳环保理念的现象;
- 建议从身边小事做起,如……;
- 号召大家行动起来。
注意:(1) 词数不少于100;(2) 可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3) 开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:低碳校园 low carbon campus
审题三步
① 定文体
主题演讲稿,开场 Dear fellow students, 结尾 Thank you!,无书信落款。
② 定时态 · 人称
we 与 fellow students 共情;现象用现在时,号召用祈使句 / 将来时。
③ 圈三要点
- 列不低碳现象 → 段2
- 从小事做起 → 段3
- 号召行动 → 段4
三段式中文提纲
问候同学,点题「低碳校园,从我做起」。
主体段
指出空教室灯常亮、塑料瓶随手扔等现象;建议随手关灯、带可重复水瓶、垃圾分类、骑车上学。
结尾段
呼吁大家从现在行动,让校园更绿,致谢。
自研参考范文
Dear fellow students,
It’s my honor to speak here on the topic of “Low Carbon Campus, Starting from Ourselves.”
However, we can easily see some ungreen habits around us. Lights are often left on in empty classrooms, and many plastic bottles are thrown away before being recycled. These habits quietly harm our environment.
Actually, we can do a lot from small things in daily life. We can turn off the lights when leaving a room, take reusable bottles instead of plastic ones, and sort waste properly. Even walking or cycling to school is a simple but helpful choice.
Dear fellow students, small actions can add up to make a big difference. Let’s take action now to make our campus greener and more beautiful!
Thank you!
亮点句拆解
04精练 · 2009 年 · 英语演讲比赛开幕词
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李华。学生会将举办每年一度的英语演讲比赛,本年度的主题为”The English Novel I Like Best”。作为组织者,你将在演讲比赛开幕时发言,请你根据以下提示用英语写一篇发言稿。
- 说明比赛的意义,如提高英语听说能力,养成读书的习惯等;
- 说明比赛的注意事项,如每人演讲不超过5分钟,语言流利,发音准确等;
- 预祝比赛圆满成功。
注意:1. 词数:不少于100词;2. 可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;3. 发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入词数。
文体
开幕致辞,开头 Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen. 结尾 Thank you!。
时态 · 人称
I 作为主席开场,we 泛指大家;意义用现在时。
三要点
①比赛意义 ②注意事项(5分钟/流利/发音)③预祝成功。
以学生会主席身份宣布开幕,点题「The English Novel I Like Best」。
主体
讲意义:提高听说、养成读书习惯;讲规则:每人不超 5 分钟、流利、发音准确。
结尾
预祝比赛圆满成功,致谢。
Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen.
Welcome to this year’s English speech competition.
As chairman of the Students’ Union, I feel greatly honored to open this event. The competition, whose theme is “The English Novel I Like Best”, is far more than a game. It will surely help us improve our listening and speaking skills, and at the same time develop a good habit of reading English novels.
Before we start, please remember a few rules. Each speech should last no more than five minutes. Besides, try to speak fluently and pronounce every word correctly. I hope all of you will do your best.
Finally, I sincerely wish this English speech competition a complete success!
Thank you!
05精练 · 2013 年 · 竞选英语俱乐部副主席
假设你是某大学的学生李津,你校英语俱乐部将选举新一届副主席,负责规划、组织俱乐部的相关活动,你欲参选,请按以下提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿。
- 个人的优势介绍(如性格、特长等);
- 组织校内的活动的设想(如举办讲座、英语晚会等);
- 组织校际交流活动的设想(如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等);
- 表达竞选的愿望。
注意:1. 词数不少于100;2. 请勿提及真实学校名称;3. 可适当的加入细节,以使内容充实,行文连贯;4. 开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:副主席 vice president;竞选 run for
文体
竞选演讲,开头 Good afternoon, my dear friends. 结尾 Thank you.;不提真实校名。
时态 · 人称
I 竞选、you 听众;优势用现在时,设想用将来时。
四要点归三段
优势→段1;校内+校际活动设想合并→段2;竞选愿望→段3。
自我介绍,宣布 run for vice president。
主体
摆优势(外向、有组织经验、英语好);设想校内讲座与英语晚会、校际辩论赛与演讲赛。
结尾
恳请大家支持,致谢。
Good afternoon, my dear friends.
My name is Li Jin,
and today I am very glad to run for vice president of our English Club.
I believe I am a proper choice for this position. I am outgoing and easy to get along with, and I have rich experience in organizing class activities. My good command of English also helps me communicate well with others.
If I am lucky enough to be elected, I will try my best to serve you. On campus, I plan to hold lectures on English culture and organize an English evening party. Besides, I hope to set up some inter-school events, such as English debating contests and speech competitions, to broaden our horizons.
I sincerely hope you can give me your support and vote.
Thank you.
06精练 · 2016 年 · 英国学生欢送辞
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
- 回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面);
- 谈谈收获或感想;
- 表达祝愿与期望。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
文体
欢送致辞,开头 Dear friends, How time flies!,温情真挚。
时态 · 人称
回顾两周用过去时,收获与祝愿用现在 / 将来时。
三要点
①回顾学习/生活/体育/文艺 ②收获感想 ③祝愿与期望。
感叹时光飞逝,回忆两周共同学习生活、运动、文艺演出。
主体
收获:提高英语、了解彼此文化、友谊长存。
结尾
祝一路平安,保持联系、期待重逢,致谢。
Dear friends,
How time flies!
Two weeks have passed so quickly, and our warm friendship has left us sweet memories. Looking back, we studied and lived together, played sports on the playground, and enjoyed wonderful art performances. These days we shared will always be treasured.
I really feel grateful for this exchange. Not only have we improved our English, but we have also learned about each other’s cultures. What is more, the sincere friendship between us will last forever.
Dear friends, as you are leaving, I truly hope you will enjoy a safe journey home. I also expect that we can keep in touch and meet again in the near future.
Thank you!
07精练 · 2020 年 5 月 · 网络学英语在线发言
假设你是晨光中学的李津。下周你校将与英国友好校举办一场在线会议,探讨如何利用网络学习英语,请你根据以下提示撰写一篇发言稿:
- 介绍你是如何利用网络学习英语的(至少写出两点);
- 简单谈谈你对利用网络学习英语的看法;
- 请友好校的学生分享他们的经验。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
文体
在线会议发言稿,开头已给出 Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin…
时态 · 人称
介绍做法用现在时 / 现在完成时,看法用现在时。
三要点
①两点做法(听播客/纪录片、上论坛)②看法 ③请对方分享。
接给定开场,转入如何用网络学英语。
主体
两点做法:听英语播客、看纪录片练听力发音;上英语论坛与母语者聊天练写作;谈看法——资源丰富、可按节奏学习,但要选可靠网站。
结尾
邀请英国同学分享他们的经验,致谢。
Good morning, dear friends. My name is Li Jin. I’d like to take this opportunity to talk about how I learn English on the Internet.
I usually make good use of online resources in two ways. First, I listen to English podcasts and watch documentaries online, which helps improve my listening and pronunciation. Second, I take part in English forums where I can chat with native speakers and practice my writing.
In my opinion, learning English on the Internet truly opens up a whole new world. It brings us rich and up-to-date materials and lets us learn at our own pace, though we should always choose reliable websites.
Now, I would also love to hear about your experience. Would you please share how you learn English online?
Thank you.
08精练 · 2004 年 · 零花钱主题班会发言(早期卷)
假设你班将举行一次英语班会,主题为”中学生应该如何使用家长给的零花钱”。请你根据提示写一篇发言稿。
- 存入银行 —— 好处:养成节约的习惯;
- 购买书籍 —— 好处:获取知识;
- 其他(音乐、体育、集邮等)—— 好处:培养兴趣。
注意:1. 词数:100左右;2. 参考词汇:零花钱—pocket money。
文体
主题班会发言稿,开头 Dear friends,;早期第 66 题,词数 100 左右即可。
时态 · 人称
第一人称 we 谈建议;一般现在时为主。
三要点
①存银行养节约 ②买书获知识 ③花在音乐/体育/集邮等培养兴趣。
点出班会主题:如何合理使用零花钱。
主体
三条建议:存银行养节约、买书长知识、投入兴趣爱好。
结尾
总结要学会理性管理零花钱,致谢。
Dear friends,
Recently our class has had a discussion about how we middle school students should spend our pocket money. In my opinion, we can use it in a wise way.
First, it is a good idea to save some money in the bank, which helps us form the habit of saving. Second, we can buy books with the money, because reading opens up our eyes and gives us more knowledge. Besides, we may also spend it on our hobbies, such as music, sports or stamp collecting, to develop our interests.
In short, no matter how we use it, we should learn to manage our money well.
Thank you!
09本课避坑与收口
- 写成书信:演讲稿不要 Yours, Li Jin 落款;结尾固定 Thank you!,开头必须有称呼语。
- 只说理无号召:主题发言 / 竞选演讲结尾要有 Let’s…! / I hope you will support me 之类的呼吁或请求。
- 忘记称呼或致谢:Good morning, dear friends. 与 Thank you! 两头缺一不可。
- 人称疏远:多用地道的 we / us 把听众拉进来,少通篇 I 自说自话。
- 超时超长:发言稿口头表达,100–130 词即可,别为凑事例写过头。
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