Wr012 · 低频老题型速览:报道 · 投诉 · 看图叙事防回潮。
2004–2008 旧高考三类题型,多年未考但考纲未删 —— 记骨架即可
01三类低频老题型:掌握骨架,不必深练
2004–2008 旧高考期出现过活动报道(2005)、投诉信(2006)、看图叙事(2008)三类题型,此后近 18 年未再单独命题,但考纲并未删除。防回潮策略:记住格式骨架和时态人称即可,不必像书信那样反复深练。
| 文体 | 年份 | 核心结构(骨架) | 时态 · 人称 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 活动报道 | 2005 | 标题 → 导语 5W(何时/何地/何人/何事)→ 主体经过 → 结尾评价意义 | 一般过去时;第三人称为主 |
| 投诉信 | 2006 | 说明投诉事由 → 具体问题与影响 → 合理诉求与期待 | 一般现在时/过去时;语气坚定有礼 |
| 看图叙事 | 2008 | 按图序审题人称时态 → 记叙经过 → 结尾感悟议论 | 一般过去时;第一人称夹叙夹议 |
这三类都是第 66 题(旧高考),词数要求 100 左右。下面各给一篇自研简范,对照骨架读即可。
02【活动报道】2005 年 · 第十五届书市开幕
请根据提示用英语写一篇短文,介绍第十五届书市开幕当天的情况,并浅谈举办书市的意义。
| 日期 | 2005年5月18日 |
| 地点 | 天津 |
| 人数 | 6万余人(来自全国各地) |
| 活动内容 | 购书、签名售书、讲座等 |
| 你的感受 | …… |
注意:1. 词数:100左右;2. 可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯。
报道骨架(5W + 经过 + 评价)
时间 5.18、地点天津、事件第十五届书市开幕、6 万余人到场。
主体(经过)
购书、签名售书、专家讲座,读者踊跃。
结尾(评价意义)
书市拉近读者与好书,营造全城阅读氛围。
The 15th Book Fair Opens in Tianjin
On May 18, 2005, the 15th Book Fair opened in Tianjin. More than 60,000 book lovers from all over the country came to the opening day, and the exhibition halls were crowded with readers of all ages.
At the fair, readers could buy all kinds of books at low prices, meet famous writers and get their books signed. Many experts also gave lectures on different subjects, which attracted a large crowd.
In my opinion, the book fair is a wonderful event. It not only brings readers closer to good books, but also encourages a love of reading in the whole city. Such events make reading a pleasant part of our life.
03【投诉信】2006 年 · 影院观影问题
假设你是李华,在出国交流学习期间,到当地一家电影院看了一场精彩的电影,但在观影过程中发现了一些问题。请你根据下列提示用英语给影院经理写一封信。
- 因广告过多,影片放映晚点;
- 影片播放音量过大;
- 安全出口标识不明,存在安全隐患;
- 适当结尾。
参考词汇:安全出口 — exit 安全隐患 — potential safety hazard
注意:1. 词数:80~120;2. 可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯;3. 信的开头已为你写好(不计入词数)。
投诉信骨架(事由 → 问题 → 诉求)
电影很好,但观影中发现几个问题,特此投诉。
具体问题
广告多导致晚点;音量过大;安全出口标识不明有隐患。
诉求结尾
希望经理调查并改进,期待下次观影更舒适。
Dear Manager,
I’m an exchange student from China. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but I have to complain about several problems I met.
First, there were too many advertisements before the film, so the movie started nearly half an hour late. Second, the sound was so loud that it almost hurt my ears. Worst of all, the exit signs were not clear at all, which is a real potential safety hazard.
I hope you can look into these problems and make some changes. I would be thankful if the next show could be more comfortable.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
04【看图叙事】2008 年 · 地铁让座日记
假设2008年2月12日是你父亲的生日,下面三幅图描绘的是你给父亲买完礼物后乘坐地铁回家时经历的一件事。请根据图示,用英语写一篇日记记叙这件事,并谈谈自己的感受。
参考词汇:地铁(列车)— subway train
注意:1. 词数不少于100;2. 可适当加入细节,以使行文连贯。
图序提示:①买完生日礼物上地铁、幸运有座 ②下一站拎重物的老奶奶上车站在面前 ③我让座、老奶奶道谢,回家告诉父亲。
看图叙事骨架(审题 → 按图序记叙 → 感悟)
2 月 12 日父亲生日,买完礼物乘地铁回家,幸运有座。
主体(按图序记叙)
老奶奶拎重物上车,我犹豫后起身让座,她微笑道谢。
结尾(感悟议论)
父亲说最好的生日礼物不是礼物,而是我做的好事。
February 12th, 2008
Today is my father’s birthday. After buying a gift for him, I got on the subway train to go home. The train was crowded, and I luckily got a seat.
At the next station, an old granny with a heavy bag got on and stood right in front of me. For a moment I hesitated, thinking of my long ride. Then I stood up and offered my seat to her. She smiled and thanked me warmly. Seeing her sit down, I felt a little tired but very happy.
When I told father about it tonight, he said the best birthday gift was not the present, but the good deed I had done.
05老题型避坑与收口
- 报道用错人称:活动报道以第三人称客观叙述,别全程 I 我我我;导语要把时间地点人物事件说全(5W)。
- 投诉信语气失控:投诉要坚定有礼,说清问题+影响+合理诉求,不要骂人或写情绪化狠话。
- 看图叙事不按图序:三幅图按顺序记叙,别跳图、别漏图;结尾要有一句感悟议论,不能只讲故事。
- 时态错位:报道/叙事都用一般过去时,别写成现在时;日记开头写日期。
- 投入过多精力:这三类是低频防回潮,记住骨架即可,时间应优先花在书信、演讲、新情境高频题上。
— Noscit · 天津高考写作 Wr 系列 —

