Wr004 · 告知 / 介绍邮件:把事情说清楚就是得分
天津考了 5 次的基本盘,核心就是按时间或逻辑把信息讲明白
01告知 / 介绍邮件:考法与骨架
这类邮件在 33 套中出现 5 次:2011 一日安排、2014 交换生、2015 赠书、2017.3 诗词大会、2020.7 成人礼。交际目的单一——把一件事或一个活动清楚地告诉对方。
2014交换生 Chris 来班
2015向中文班捐赠图书
2017.3介绍中国诗词大会
2020.7介绍成人礼活动
02高分句式库:开头 · 主体 · 结尾
| 位置 | 自研可迁移句型 | 中文 |
|---|---|---|
| 开头·告知目的 | I’m writing to tell you about our plan for… | 我写信是想告诉你我们……的计划。 |
| I’m more than delighted to learn that… | 得知……我非常高兴。 | |
| 主体·介绍安排 | In the morning we will…, after which we will… | 上午我们将……,之后我们将……。 |
| The activity includes…, ranging from…to… | 活动内容包括……,从……到……。 | |
| 结尾·期待收尾 | I hope you’ll like this arrangement. | 希望你会喜欢这个安排。 |
| I would appreciate it if you could… / I’m looking forward to your reply. | 如蒙……将不胜感激 / 期待你的回复。 |
032014 年 · 交换生接待(精讲)
假设你是晨光中学高二(1)班的班长李津,得知美国学生Chris作为交换生,下学期将到你班学习。请你根据以下提示,给他写封邮件:
- 表示欢迎;
- 介绍与本地生活相关的信息(如气候、饮食等);
- 介绍本班情况;
- 希望Chris做哪些事情,以增进中美学生间的了解和友谊。
注意:(1)请勿提及考生相关的真实信息;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)词数不少于100;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:交换生 exchange student
① 定文体
给即将来班的交换生写邮件 → 告知 / 介绍邮件,语气热情友好。
② 定时态 · 人称
介绍本地与班级现状用一般现在时;展望下学期用将来时。I 对 you。
③ 圈四要点
- 欢迎;
- 气候 + 饮食;
- 本班情况;
- 希望 Chris 做的事。
用题面给出的开头句,接着表达欢迎与期待。
主体段(要点②③)
介绍天津气候饮食,再介绍班级氛围与同学。
结尾段(要点④)
希望 Chris 分享本国文化,增进友谊,落款。
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jin, monitor of Class One, Grade Eleven.
I’m more than delighted to learn that you’re coming to our class as an exchange student next term. A warm welcome to you!
Tianjin is a northern city with four clear seasons. Winter here is rather cold, so you’d better pack some warm clothes. As for food, we enjoy noodles and dumplings, which I’m sure you’ll love. Our class is a big, friendly family of 45 students, who are hard-working and always ready to help you. We also have many after-school activities, such as English Corner and basketball.
I hope you can share your culture with us, and we’ll hold a party together. I’m sure we’ll become good friends.
Yours,
Li Jin
04精练 · 2011 年 · 天津一日安排
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李华。你校将于6月26日接待来自于美国某中学的学生访问团。你受学校委托,负责安排在津的一日活动。请根据以下提示,用英语给该团的领队Smith先生写一封电子邮件,介绍活动计划并简要说明理由,最后征求对方意见。
- 上午与我校学生座谈(话题如校园生活、文化差异等);
- 中午与我校学生共同进餐(午餐包括饺子、面条等);
- 下午与我校学生游览海河。
注意:1. 词数不少于100;2. 可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;3. 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:海河 the Haihe River
文体
给领队 Smith 先生发的安排邮件,正式礼貌。
时态 · 人称
将来安排用一般将来时;I 对 you。署名李华。
三要点
①上午座谈 ②中午共餐 ③下午游海河,另加理由与征求意见。
照抄题面开头句,点明写信告知一日安排。
主体
按上午—中午—下午顺序写三个活动,各带一句理由。
结尾
征求意见,落款 Yours sincerely, Li Hua。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union, from Chenguang High School.
I’m writing to tell you about our schedule for your group’s one-day visit on June 26th.
In the morning, we’ll have a free talk in the school hall about school life and cultural differences. Our students are eager to practice their oral English with you, which I believe will bring us closer. At noon, we’ll enjoy lunch together in our dining hall, with traditional Chinese food like dumplings and noodles served. In the afternoon, we plan to take a walk along the Haihe River, where we can enjoy the beautiful views and take some photos.
I hope you’ll like this arrangement. Please let me know if you have any suggestions.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
05精练 · 2015 年 · 向中文班赠书
假设你是晨光中学学生会主席李津,你校拟向美国友好交流学校的中文班捐赠一批图书。请根据以下提示,写一封邮件与中文班班长Chris联系,并告知将于今年七月赴对方学校参加夏令营时带去赠书。
- 自我介绍;
- 拟捐赠图书的类型、册数、用途等;
- 询问对方的其他需求。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)请适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯。
参考词汇:学生会 the Student Union
文体
与友好学校中文班班长联系的告知邮件。
时态 · 人称
赠书安排用将来时;I 对 you。署名李津。
三要点
①自我介绍 ②图书类型/册数/用途 ③询问其他需求。
自我介绍,说明写信目的是告知赠书。
主体
写清图书类型、册数、用途,并说明七月夏令营带去。
结尾
询问对方是否还有别的需要,落款。
Dear Chris,
I’m Li Jin, chairman of the Student Union from Chenguang High School. Learning that your Chinese class is eager to know more about China, our school has decided to donate some books to you.
We have prepared 50 books, including Chinese novels, dictionaries and picture albums about traditional Chinese culture. These books cover history, festivals and daily life, so they will surely help you understand China better. They will be very useful for your studies, and I’ll bring them to your school myself when I attend the summer camp this July.
Besides these, is there anything else your class needs, such as Chinese music CDs or teaching cards? Please feel free to tell me, and I will try my best to prepare them.
Yours,
Li Jin
06精练 · 2017 年 3 月 · 中国诗词大会
假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你的美国笔友Chris正在学习汉语,他得知“中国诗词大会”在CCTV播出,非常感兴趣,便写信给你,希望你介绍相关情况及更多了解中国文化的途径。请根据以下提示给他写一封信。
- 简单介绍“中国诗词大会”引起的反响;
- 介绍了解中国文化的途径(如阅读相关书籍、利用媒体资源等);
- 表达对Chris学习中国文化的祝愿。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:中国诗词大会 Chinese Poetry Competition
文体
回复笔友咨询的介绍邮件,语气亲切。
时态 · 人称
介绍节目反响用现在完成时与一般现在时;I 对 you。
三要点
①节目反响 ②了解文化途径 ③祝愿。
回应来信,点出对诗词大会的兴趣。
主体
介绍节目火爆反响,再给出读书、看节目等途径。
结尾
祝愿 Chris 学好汉语、爱上中国文化。
Dear Chris,
I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in the Chinese Poetry Competition on CCTV.
The show has been a huge hit across China. Competitors of all ages recite classical poems and guess lines from memory, and millions of viewers watch it every week. It has brought classical Chinese culture back into the spotlight.
To learn more about Chinese culture, you can read books about classical poems, such as the famous Three Hundred Tang Poems, and watch more cultural TV programs. Besides, some online courses on Chinese history will surely be helpful as well.
I truly hope you’ll make great progress in Chinese and fall in love with our culture step by step.
Yours,
Li Jin
07精练 · 2020 年 7 月 · 十八岁成人礼
假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动,你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件,介绍相关情况,内容包括:
- 成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事迹录像等);
- 对活动的感受;
- 对自己未来的展望。
注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:成人礼 the coming-of-age ceremony · 新冠肺炎 COVID-19
文体
向朋友介绍已举办活动的邮件,兼有告知与分享感受。
时态 · 人称
活动已于 6 月 8 日举办,主体用一般过去时;展望用将来时。
三要点
①活动内容 ②感受 ③未来展望。
照抄开头句,点明成人礼刚于 6 月 8 日举行。
主体
回顾成长、看校友抗疫录像,再写自己被打动的感受。
结尾
展望未来,立志做有担当的人。
Dear Chris,
I’m so glad to hear from you.
Our school held the coming-of-age ceremony on June 8th. We first walked through the “18-year-old gate” and looked back on our growth over the past three years. Then we watched a video about our alumni fighting against COVID-19, which moved us all to tears. We also received touching letters written by our parents.
The ceremony was truly meaningful. It made me realize that I am no longer a child and should take on more responsibilities for my family and society.
Looking ahead, I hope to go to my ideal college and grow into a responsible citizen who can contribute to our country.
Yours,
Li Jin
08告知 / 介绍邮件避坑与收口
- 信息点遗漏:一日安排的上午 / 中午 / 下午、成人礼的内容 / 感受 / 展望,逐条对照题面打勾。
- 时间顺序乱:活动安排类必须按时间或逻辑顺序写,乱用连接词会让阅卷人找不到要点。
- 语气不当:告知邮件宜热情但不夸张,给 Mr. Smith 这类对象要比给 Chris 更正式。
- 落款与人设错:2011 是李华、落款 Yours sincerely;其余多为李津、Yours。别写错人名。
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