考研小作文 PL007・感谢信 / 道歉信 / 祝贺信
英二情感型书信三件套|2010 感谢 · 2018 道歉 · 2011 祝贺
01情感型书信:三件套框架
感谢、道歉、祝贺都是一对一、私人或半私人语气,英二偏爱(本区间 4 次全在英二)。三者结构相似:先表情感 → 再说事由 → 收尾延伸。
| 类型 | 开头标志 | 主体任务 |
|---|---|---|
| 感谢 | I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for… | 具体感谢对方做了什么 + 带来的帮助/影响 + 回报或欢迎。 |
| 道歉 | I am terribly sorry to tell you that… | 道歉 + 客观理由(不找借口)+ 弥补方案(改期/补偿)。 |
| 祝贺 | I am thrilled to hear that… / Congratulations on… | 祝贺事由 + 常配 1–2 条建议或祝愿。 |
02三件套句式库
03真题示范一:【英二】2010 · 第 47 题(感谢)
47. Directions: You have just come back from the U.S. as a member of a Sino-American cultural exchange program. Write a letter to your American colleague to
1) express your thanks for his/her warm reception;
2) welcome him/her to visit China in due course.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei” instead.
Do not write your address. (10 points)
称呼Dear John,
P1I have just arrived back in China, and I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for your warm reception during my stay in the U.S.
P2Your help made my visit both enjoyable and productive. I especially appreciate the time you spent showing me around and introducing me to your colleagues. I could not have managed without you.
P3I warmly welcome you to visit China whenever it is convenient. I would be delighted to show you around my city. Looking forward to seeing you again.
落款Yours sincerely,
Zhang Wei
要点两个编号要点:① 感谢热情接待(具体到”带我参观、介绍同事”);② 欢迎访华。
避雷落款用 Zhang Wei(英二 2010–2011 年题)。
04真题示范二:【英二】2018 · 第 47 题(道歉)
47. Directions: Suppose you have to cancel your travel plan and will not be able to visit Professor Smith. Write him an email to
1) apologize and explain the situation, and
2) suggest a future meeting.
You should write about 100 words on the ANSWER SHEET.
Do not use your own name. Use “Li Ming” instead.
Do not write your address. (10 points)
称呼Dear Prof. Smith,
P1I am terribly sorry to tell you that I cannot visit you as planned, and I am writing to make a sincere apology.
P2Unfortunately, I have just been told that an important group project must be completed on the very day of my visit, so I have no choice but to cancel the trip. I feel very sorry for any inconvenience this may cause you.
P3I wonder if we could meet another time. I would be happy to visit you the following month, whenever it suits you. Please accept my apologies again.
落款Yours,
Li Ming
要点① 道歉 + 理由(小组项目当天必须完成);② 提议改期(下月择时再访)。理由体面、补救具体。
语气对教授 Dear Prof. Smith / Yours,;I wonder if we could… / whenever it suits you 委婉商量。
05真题示范三:【英二】2011 · 第 47 题(祝贺)
47. Directions: Suppose your cousin Li Ming has just been admitted to a university. Write him/her a letter to
1) congratulate him/her, and
2) give him/her suggestions on how to get prepared for university life.
You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.
Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Zhang Wei” instead.
Do not write the address. (10 points)
称呼Dear Li Ming,
P1I am thrilled to hear that you have been admitted to university. I am writing to send you my warmest congratulations!
P2To help you get prepared, I have a few suggestions. First, you should manage your time well, balancing study and rest. Besides, it is a good idea to read widely and join some clubs that interest you. Finally, learn to live independently, as you will take care of yourself.
P3Congratulations again. I wish you a wonderful university life.
落款Yours,
Zhang Wei
要点① 祝贺录取;② 给大学生活建议(时间管理、阅读社团、独立生活)。注意本题收件人是表弟 Li Ming,落款才是 Zhang Wei,别把两者写混。
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