考研大作文 PW008・【英一】图画真题 2014-2017

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考研大作文 PW008・【英一】图画真题 2014–2017

Directions 逐字 · 真题漫画实拍 · 原创范文与结构批注

PW008 · 2014

英一2014 · 相携(三十年前与现在)

Directions(真题逐字)

52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

1) describe the drawing briefly,

2) interpret its intended meaning, and

3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

YI2014 真题漫画

真题漫画:左“三十年前……”年轻母亲牵小女孩;右“现在……”成年女儿搀扶老母亲;图注 相携。
原创范文 · 英语一

As is vividly shown in the two drawings, thirty years ago a young mother walked hand in hand with her little daughter, while nowadays the grown-up daughter is supporting her aged mother arm in arm. The caption reads “Accompanying Each Other”.

The pictures convey a warm message: filial love is a two-way bond. Parents devote their best years to raising their children, and when they grow old, it is the children’s turn to look after them. This mutual care is the very glue of a family. Yet in modern society, many young people are so occupied with work that they spare little time for their aging parents, who may feel deeply lonely at home.

From my perspective, respecting and caring for the elderly is a traditional virtue we should never abandon. We should spend more time accompanying our parents. Only when the warmth of giving and receiving keeps flowing can every family live in harmony.

(约185词)

描图双图对比:三十年前 vs 现在,抄图注 Accompanying Each Other。

寓意点出“爱是双向的反哺”,转折句联系现代社会空巢老人问题。

议论呼吁陪伴父母,倒装句收尾。

PW008 · 2015

英一2015 · 手机时代的聚会

Directions(真题逐字)

52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following picture. In your essay, you should

1) describe the picture briefly,

2) interpret its intended meaning, and

3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

YI2015 真题漫画

真题漫画:四人围圆桌聚餐、菜肴丰盛,却各自低头看手机;图注 手机时代的聚会。
原创范文 · 英语一

As is vividly shown in the drawing, four friends sit around a dinner table laden with dishes. Yet, instead of talking to one another, each lowers his or her head, eyes fixed on a mobile phone. The warm meal has quietly become a gathering of isolated screen-watchers.

The picture mirrors a widespread phenomenon in the mobile era. Phones, originally designed to connect people, now drive them apart at the very same table. Absorbed in the virtual world, we ignore the friend beside us, and the warmth of face-to-face talk is gradually fading. A case in point is many family dinners today: everyone clicks and scrolls, but almost no one chats.

It is high time we put down the phone. When gathering with family and friends, we should look up, talk more and cherish the people right in front of us. Only by reconnecting in reality can we rescue human bonds from the cold screen.

(约180词)

描图围桌 + 菜肴 + 各自看手机的对比,点出 isolated screen-watchers。

寓意批“手机疏离面对面交流”,举家庭聚餐泛例。

建议It is high time… 呼吁放下手机。

PW008 · 2016

英一2016 · 与其只提要求,不如做个榜样

Directions(真题逐字)

52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should

1) describe the pictures briefly,

2) interpret the meaning, and

3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

YI2016 真题漫画

真题双图:左父看电视喊“儿子,你给我好好学习!”;右父子各自伏案;图注 与其只提要求,不如做个榜样。
原创范文 · 英语一

As is vividly shown in the two pictures, in the left panel a father lounges in an armchair watching TV, shouting to his son “Study hard!”, while the boy sits at the desk looking uneasy. In the right panel, however, father and son are both working diligently at their own desks. The caption reads: “Rather than merely making demands, set an example.”

The pictures highlight a truth about family education: parents’ behavior speaks louder than their words. Many parents are eager to see their children excel, yet they themselves spend the whole evening on the sofa. Children learn by imitation, not by lectures. If a father complains about study while glued to the television, his demand sounds hollow. Conversely, parents who keep reading and working quietly set a role model that their children willingly follow.

From my perspective, education is largely a matter of influence. Parents should first improve themselves rather than simply order their children around. Only when adults walk the talk can they raise a self-disciplined next generation.

(约195词)

描图双图对比 + 直接引气泡 Study hard + 抄图注。

寓意身教重于言传,正反对比展开(看电视 vs 一起读书)。

议论walk the talk 收尾,扣题榜样。

PW008 · 2017

英一2017 · “有书”与“读书”

Directions(真题逐字)

52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should

1) describe the picture briefly,

2) interpret the meaning, and

3) give your comments.

You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

YI2017 真题漫画

真题双图:左靠在满架书前“我有这么多书!”;右桌前读书“我争取今年读完20本书。”;图注“有书”与“读书”。
原创范文 · 英语一

As is vividly shown in the two pictures, in the left panel a man leans back comfortably before a whole wall of books, proudly saying “I have so many books!” In the right panel, however, another young man sits at a desk with a single open book before him, and makes up his mind: “I will try to read twenty books this year.”

The contrast conveys a thought-provoking message: owning books is not the same as reading them. A huge collection that merely decorates the shelf brings no real benefit. Knowledge comes only when we actually open a book and digest it. Sadly, many people take pride in amassing possessions while rarely turning a page. Possession without action is nothing but vanity.

From my perspective, it is far better to read a few books thoroughly than to own a whole library untouched. We should turn our “having books” into “reading books”. Only by putting knowledge into practice can we truly enrich our minds.

(约190词)

描图双图对比 + 直接引两句气泡。

寓意点破“拥有 ≠ 阅读”,批评藏书不读的虚荣。

议论把 having 转 reading,呼应图注收尾。

PW008 · 小结

小结本课四篇共性

2014-2017 命题规律

  1. 2016、2017 为双图对比作文,描图段必须写清两幅画的对照关系。
  2. 话题落在家庭伦理(相携、榜样)与人生态度(手机、读书行动)。
  3. 范文均用 on the contrary / however 制造对比张力,是双图题的高分句式。
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